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My dream house is not necessarily a large house, as long as it fits my style and character. It is located on the outskirts of town. It will be a two- storey house facing west-south side. Moreover, my house can not be lack of a large garden surrounded by thousands of different colors of flowers and fruits. I like it the most when having a breakfast or enjoying night views in my own garden. Simplicity is beauty, this explains why I would prefer an airy space rather than a well-equipped house. However, the house should have basic necessities in the kitchen and bathroom to serve all my demands in daily life. In addition, I will use bright color tones for the whole house, especially my bedroom to make it more spacious. My bedroom will be more perfect and ideal if it has a balcony where i could smell the fragrance from the garden as well as enjoy the sound of the birds in the morning. Besides, I also have an intention of having a small garage and storage. In conclusion, I wish I could make my dream become true.

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Căn nhà mơ ước của tôi không cần thiết phải là một căn nhà rộng lớn, miễn là nó phù hợp với phong cách sống và tính cách của bản thân tôi. Nó là một căn nhà nằm ở ngoại ô của thị trấn. Đó sẽ là một căn nhà hai tầng quay hướng đông nam. Căn nhà của tôi không thể thiếu một khu vườn rộng được bao quanh bởi hàng nghìn màu sắc của những bông hoa và cây ăn quả. Tôi thích nhất khi có một bữa ăn sáng hay tận hưởng vẻ đẹp của cảnh vật ban đêm ở trong chính khu vườn. Đơn giản chính là vẻ đẹp, đó là lí do vì sao tôi thích có một không gian ngoài trời thoáng đãng hơn là một căn nhà hiện đại. Tuy vậy thì căn nhà của tôi cũng cần có đủ những đồ dùng thiết yếu nhất trong phòng tắm, phòng ăn để phục vụ những nhu cầu trong cuộc sống hằng ngày. Thêm vào đó, tôi muốn sử dụng tông màu sáng cho căn nhà của mình, đặc biệt là phòng ngủ để khiến nó trông rộng rãi hơn. Căn phòng ngủ sẽ trở nên tuyệt vời và lí tưởng hơn nếu nó có một ban công, nơi tôi có thể tận hưởng những hương thơm từ khu vườn cũng như nghe tiếng chim hót vào mỗi buổi sớm. bên cạnh đó, mình cũng có dự định xây một ga-ra và một nhà kho nhỏ. Tóm lại, tôi ước tôi có thể biến ước mơ thành hiện thực.

My dream house is not necessarily a large house, as long as it fits my style and character. It is located on the outskirts of town. It will be a two- storey house facing west-south side. Moreover, my house can not be lack of a large garden surrounded by thousands of different colors of flowers and fruits. I like it the most when having a breakfast or enjoying night views in my own garden. Simplicity is beauty, this explains why I would prefer an airy space rather than a well-equipped house. However, the house should have basic necessities in the kitchen and bathroom to serve all my demands in daily life. In addition, I will use bright color tones for the whole house, especially my bedroom to make it more spacious. My bedroom will be more perfect and ideal if it has a balcony where i could smell the fragrance from the garden as well as enjoy the sound of the birds in the morning. Besides, I also have an intention of having a small garage and storage. In conclusion, I wish I could make my dream become true.

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My dream house is a big palace. It is in the mountains. It is surrounded by lots of trees. It has seven rooms: three bedrooms, two bathrooms, one kitchen and one livingroom. There is a large swimming pool in front of it. I have some robots in the palace. They help me to clean the floor, cook meals, water flowers.... I'm happy to live in my palace.

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Ngôi nhà mơ ước của tôi là một cung điện lớn. Nó ở trên núi. Nó được bao quanh bởi rất nhiều cây cối. Nó có bảy phòng: ba phòng ngủ, hai phòng tắm, một nhà bếp và một phòng khách. Có một bể bơi lớn ở phía trước của nó. Tôi có một số người máy trong cung điện. Họ giúp tôi lau sàn, nấu ăn, tưới hoa .... Tôi hạnh phúc khi sống trong cung điện của mình.

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My dream house is palace. It is in the mountain. There will have 10 large rooms and it will plant many green trees, flowers and have big swimming pool in the garden. In each rooms, it will have a smart TVs, home robots. the smart TV will help me surf the Internet, send and receive my email, order food from the supermarket and contact my friends on other planets. home robots will clean the floors, cook the meals, wash the clothes, water the flowers and feed the dogs and cats. I very love dream house.

My dream house is a modern storey house. It has a flower garden. The house has 9 rooms, many modern furniture. My room had a smart TV and a large fridge stocked with lots of snacks. There is a swimming pool in the front yard. I love that future house

Hello everyone! Today I'll tell you about my house. I live in a big house in the countryside and it is very beautiful. It has a living room, a kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room, there is a table, four chairs, a television and an air conditioner. My bedroom is very nice. There is a computer, a bed, a lamp and two pictures on the wall. And a bookshelf above the table, some teddy bears on the bed and a wardrobe. The kitchen has a refrigerator, a stove and a sink. Next to the kitchen is the bathroom. It has a shower, a washing machine and a tub. I love my house very much.

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House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

   House is the place to stay together with part of our family. A good house is the house that makes the dweller fells so comfortable. My dream house is the house that has complete facility and wide garden. I want to try my best to get my dream house in my future later on.

            Actually, my dream house is so simple to make if I have a lot of money. Because I ‘m Balinese, I will build my house use Bali style because I am proud as Balinese, it means I respect Bali culture as my culture. In the first floor of my house I want to have six bedrooms, one bedroom for my parents, one bedroom for me, and the other bedroom for my children later on. In every bedroom I want to have complete furniture and facilities such as there are bathrooms, table, chair, television, etc. In every bathroom there are complete facilities such as shower, the thing that use to organize temperature of the water so that I enjoy when take a bath. In the kitchen of my house I want to have complete facilities such as refrigerator to put the foods, vegetable, meat, eggs, cold drink, etc, the stove to cook everyday and the other facility.

            In the second floor of my house I will make a big living room, the purpose just as a place together with part of my family. In every side of the second floor there are many windows, the purpose just so that I can enjoy the view from the second floor. In the right side of my house I will make a wide garden filled with complete kind of fruits. Behind of my house I will make swimming pool and small football yard. Because my hobby is playing football I will use that yard to play football together with my friends after work, my life cannot be separated from football. If we already get a lot of sweet we will swim together. Have you ever imagined to have your dream house? I think you will enjoy your daily activity at home and that is heaven of world. I know to make my dream house will not be easy for me because it needs a lot of money , to get a lot of money the first thing that should I do is I must be successful. I want to make my family, friends, and the other that I love proud to me.

            “Home sweet home” is a word that really could express your feeling to have such a great house. My dream house is the house that makes me and my family feels comfortable; enjoy the situation, and safe. Although just small house it can be my dream house for me because the most important things for me is togetherness with part of my family. Luxury house is not always comfortable for me.

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Here is my writing on the "My Dream House". I would be grateful if someone would review my essay and give me feedback on the sentence structure and grammar of writing.

My Dream House

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

I and my family live together in a small city but it is so modern and beautiful. Now , I am nearly 13 years old and I am on grade 6. My family has 4 members: My father, my mother, my sister and me. My father and my mother are workers. My sister and me are students. My house has 6 romms: A living room, 3 bedroom, 2 bathroom and a kitchen. Althhough 6 rooms in my house are wonderful but I love my bedroom best. In my bedroom, there are a table, a bed and a bookshelf. I always study at the table in front of the big window. I love my family very much because my family brings fun for me when I am tired or sad.

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't like very large building because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I like to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would like to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home like a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.
 

My dream house is a villa on the moon. There will be a lot of tall buildings and green trees. It will be very bis with 10 rooms. I will use solar energy travel by plance. I think I will like my bedroom best because the will be much morderm furniture in it, such as: a cable TV, a washing machine, an air conditional, the Interet and soon. I will suft the web’s communicate with people all over the world.

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live in, so do I. I enjoy to live living in a calm and open environment, so house built on small land (I'm not sure what you mean by 'small land' here) won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound, where I can stroll, especially when I feel bored on at my job. I want the a garden in front of my house, which will give me a natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the a house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the a noisy environment. Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size of the house having,which has 2 or 3 floors in it. I don't like very large buildings because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in on the second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floors is excessively heated heat up excessively during the very hot season, whereas I like to stay in on the second or third floor during the winter, as the ground floor will be becomes excessively cold during that period. (Try to shorten this sentence or divide it into two) Next thing is about a gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person.

I have mentioned so many physical needs (you mentioned only one of them, actually, - shelter) in my above paragraph (in my paragraph above), but I would like to conculde conclude my writing essay by saying that a cool and amicable family environment is must to should make our homes feel like a heaven. Otherwise, it will would be a hell, and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with our familyies.

In the future, I will live in a hi-tech house. It might be by the sea and it's will be surrounded by the blue sea. There are twenty rooms in my house. My house will has a big garage so that I can store my super cars. My future house will have wind and solar energy. I will use hi-tech and automatic machines such as a smart clock, modern fridge, and so on. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets on this TV. I might also join online classes on TV and not have to go to school. I love my house very much.

My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars trere. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automatic machines such as a smart clock, morden fridge, automatic dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantasic TV. I might aloso join online classes on TV and not have to go to school.

I live in a big house in the countryside and it is very beautiful. It has a living room, a kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room, there is a table, four chairs, a television and an air conditioner. My bedroom is very nice. There is a computer, a bed, a lamp and two pictures on the wall. And a bookshelf above the table, some teddy bears on the bed and a wardrobe. The kitchen has a refrigerator, a stove and a sink. Next to the kitchen is the bathroom. It has a shower, a washing machine and a tub. I love my house very much.