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Write about your last summer holiday

Trấn Thùy · Accepted Answer

Last summer, I and my friends go to Vung Tau by motobike. we have two interesting days in Vung Tau city. We start my trip on 6h AM. after 1 hour, We get to Long Thanh stop stations. we have stopped there for 15 minutes anh drink fresh cow's milk. Then we continue my trip to vung tau city. after 1 hour we get vung tau city. many hotel and motel but we had to spend hard 1 hour to look up a hotel for staying. the hotel which we stay is a small nice hotel, from our hotel we can see the beach and it had a good view. Because we have a long trip by motobike so that we are very tired. after check in we only want to sleeping. I don't know, what do other peoples do but when I wake up and walk to outside. I see my friends drinking coffee. at that 2 o'clock PM. we have spent 2 hours for drinking coffee after that we go to the beach to swim. at the evening, we have a round in vung tau by motobike. verybody want to see vung tau by night until 10 o'clock we return back our hotel. and all night, we play card togethe. on the morning tomorrow. we walk to the beach and swim with the local peoples and anothe tourists. after that we go to coffee shop and chat togethe. until 12 o'clock we have lunch and 3 o'clock we come back to hcm city. we arrived hcm at 5 o'clock. we bye togethe. and end 2 interesting day in vung tau.Câu trả lời: Last summer, I and my friends go to Vung Tau by motobike. we have two interesting days in Vung Tau city. We start my trip on 6h AM. after 1 hour, We get to Long Thanh stop stations. we have stopped there for 15 minutes anh drink fresh cow's milk. Then we continue my trip to vung tau city. after 1 hour we get vung tau city. many hotel and motel but we had to spend hard 1 hour to look up a hotel for staying. the hotel which we stay is a small nice hotel, from our hotel we can see the beach and it had a good view. Because we have a long trip by motobike so that we are very tired. after check in we only want to sleeping. I don't know, what do other peoples do but when I wake up and walk to outside. I see my friends drinking coffee. at that 2 o'clock PM. we have spent 2 hours for drinking coffee after that we go to the beach to swim. at the evening, we have a round in vung tau by motobike. verybody want to see vung tau by night until 10 o'clock we return back our hotel. and all night, we play card togethe. on the morning tomorrow. we walk to the beach and swim with the local peoples and anothe tourists. after that we go to coffee shop and chat togethe. until 12 o'clock we have lunch and 3 o'clock we come back to hcm city. we arrived hcm at 5 o'clock. we bye togethe. and end 2 interesting day in vung tau.

Tiên Hồ Đỗ Thị Cẩm · Answer

Trấn Thùy ơi!Topic là về last summer holiday, tức là phải viết theo thì quá khứ đơn chứ, sao lại dùng hiện tại đơn, và có lẽ chuyến đi của bạn hơi dài, nếu học thuộc thì khá khó nhớ, bạn viết có ý nhưng theo tiếng việt nhiều quá, kiểu văn vẽ, mình nghĩ bạn nên xem lại về ngữ pháp và đơn giản hóa suy nghĩ lại để viết các ý sao cho ngắn gọn hơn nữa nhé! Đây là bài của mình có gì các bạn cùng check lại lần nữa nhé:   Last summer holiday, I went to Da Nang for a short vacation with my family. That was a good trip, I had a great time to relax and forget about the pressures at school. On the first day, my family and I went to My Khe beach. It was very nice with fresh and cool atmosphere. We went jogging on the beach along the rows of coconut trees and went swimming. Besides that, we also ate various kinds of seafood. On the next day, we visited Ba Na Hills and played games. We bought some souvenirs for our relatives and neighbors. Our find destination was Hoi An- an ancient town to visit our aunt. We ate ''Cao lau''. It was very tasty with rice noodle, meat and tomato sauce. After 3 days in Da Nang, we came back home and until now I still get excited every time. I think about visiting Da Nang. I am hoping to go there again soon.That's all. Thanks for watching!!!!!!Câu trả lời: Trấn Thùy ơi!Topic là về last summer holiday, tức là phải viết theo thì quá khứ đơn chứ, sao lại dùng hiện tại đơn, và có lẽ chuyến đi của bạn hơi dài, nếu học thuộc thì khá khó nhớ, bạn viết có ý nhưng theo tiếng việt nhiều quá, kiểu văn vẽ, mình nghĩ bạn nên xem lại về ngữ pháp và đơn giản hóa suy nghĩ lại để viết các ý sao cho ngắn gọn hơn nữa nhé! Đây là bài của mình có gì các bạn cùng check lại lần nữa nhé:   Last summer holiday, I went to Da Nang for a short vacation with my family. That was a good trip, I had a great time to relax and forget about the pressures at school. On the first day, my family and I went to My Khe beach. It was very nice with fresh and cool atmosphere. We went jogging on the beach along the rows of coconut trees and went swimming. Besides that, we also ate various kinds of seafood. On the next day, we visited Ba Na Hills and played games. We bought some souvenirs for our relatives and neighbors. Our find destination was Hoi An- an ancient town to visit our aunt. We ate ''Cao lau''. It was very tasty with rice noodle, meat and tomato sauce. After 3 days in Da Nang, we came back home and until now I still get excited every time. I think about visiting Da Nang. I am hoping to go there again soon.That's all. Thanks for watching!!!!!!

Nguyễn Việt Hoàng · Answer

Last summer, I and my friends go to Vung Tau by motobike. we have two interesting days in Vung Tau city. We start my trip on 6h AM. after 1 hour, We get to Long Thanh stop stations. we have stopped there for 15 minutes anh drink fresh cow's milk. Then we continue my trip to vung tau city. after 1 hour we get vung tau city. many hotel and motel but we had to spend hard 1 hour to look up a hotel for staying. the hotel which we stay is a small nice hotel, from our hotel we can see the beach and it had a good view. Because we have a long trip by motobike so that we are very tired. after check in we only want to sleeping. I don't know, what do other peoples do but when I wake up and walk to outside. I see my friends drinking coffee. at that 2 o'clock PM. we have spent 2 hours for drinking coffee after that we go to the beach to swim. at the evening, we have a round in vung tau by motobike. verybody want to see vung tau by night until 10 o'clock we return back our hotel. and all night, we play card togethe. on the morning tomorrow. we walk to the beach and swim with the local peoples and anothe tourists. after that we go to coffee shop and chat togethe. until 12 o'clock we have lunch and 3 o'clock we come back to hcm city. we arrived hcm at 5 o'clock. we bye togethe. and end 2 interesting day in vung tau.Đây mà lớp 8 hảCâu trả lời: Last summer, I and my friends go to Vung Tau by motobike. we have two interesting days in Vung Tau city. We start my trip on 6h AM. after 1 hour, We get to Long Thanh stop stations. we have stopped there for 15 minutes anh drink fresh cow's milk. Then we continue my trip to vung tau city. after 1 hour we get vung tau city. many hotel and motel but we had to spend hard 1 hour to look up a hotel for staying. the hotel which we stay is a small nice hotel, from our hotel we can see the beach and it had a good view. Because we have a long trip by motobike so that we are very tired. after check in we only want to sleeping. I don't know, what do other peoples do but when I wake up and walk to outside. I see my friends drinking coffee. at that 2 o'clock PM. we have spent 2 hours for drinking coffee after that we go to the beach to swim. at the evening, we have a round in vung tau by motobike. verybody want to see vung tau by night until 10 o'clock we return back our hotel. and all night, we play card togethe. on the morning tomorrow. we walk to the beach and swim with the local peoples and anothe tourists. after that we go to coffee shop and chat togethe. until 12 o'clock we have lunch and 3 o'clock we come back to hcm city. we arrived hcm at 5 o'clock. we bye togethe. and end 2 interesting day in vung tau.Đây mà lớp 8 hả

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