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Write about your dream house in the future use the future simple 

HN
1 tháng 5 2018 lúc 20:31


House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

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MR
1 tháng 5 2018 lúc 20:36

   House is the place to stay together with part of our family. A good house is the house that makes the dweller fells so comfortable. My dream house is the house that has complete facility and wide garden. I want to try my best to get my dream house in my future later on.

            Actually, my dream house is so simple to make if I have a lot of money. Because I ‘m Balinese, I will build my house use Bali style because I am proud as Balinese, it means I respect Bali culture as my culture. In the first floor of my house I want to have six bedrooms, one bedroom for my parents, one bedroom for me, and the other bedroom for my children later on. In every bedroom I want to have complete furniture and facilities such as there are bathrooms, table, chair, television, etc. In every bathroom there are complete facilities such as shower, the thing that use to organize temperature of the water so that I enjoy when take a bath. In the kitchen of my house I want to have complete facilities such as refrigerator to put the foods, vegetable, meat, eggs, cold drink, etc, the stove to cook everyday and the other facility.

            In the second floor of my house I will make a big living room, the purpose just as a place together with part of my family. In every side of the second floor there are many windows, the purpose just so that I can enjoy the view from the second floor. In the right side of my house I will make a wide garden filled with complete kind of fruits. Behind of my house I will make swimming pool and small football yard. Because my hobby is playing football I will use that yard to play football together with my friends after work, my life cannot be separated from football. If we already get a lot of sweet we will swim together. Have you ever imagined to have your dream house? I think you will enjoy your daily activity at home and that is heaven of world. I know to make my dream house will not be easy for me because it needs a lot of money , to get a lot of money the first thing that should I do is I must be successful. I want to make my family, friends, and the other that I love proud to me.

            “Home sweet home” is a word that really could express your feeling to have such a great house. My dream house is the house that makes me and my family feels comfortable; enjoy the situation, and safe. Although just small house it can be my dream house for me because the most important things for me is togetherness with part of my family. Luxury house is not always comfortable for me.

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DA
1 tháng 5 2018 lúc 20:39

Here is my writing on the "My Dream House". I would be grateful if someone would review my essay and give me feedback on the sentence structure and grammar of writing.

My Dream House

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

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H24
1 tháng 5 2018 lúc 20:44

bạn muốn dịch thì là : 

Viết về ngôi nhà mơ ước của bạn trong tương lai sử dụng đơn giản trong tương lai

còn viết về ngôi nhà mơ ước trong tương lại bằng tiếng anh thì sẽ là :

Nothing but owning a perfect and dreamy house to relax after a stress filled day will give me real comfort and great pleasure. I would to have a large, fully-furnished house, where I can enjoy amazing and comfortable moments with my loved ones. I am fond of having a large roof of the house in order to have a small garden on the roof with some kinds of plants and different colors of flowers. Moreover, in front of the house should stand a large garden with open space, so that I can freely organize some outdoor activities and family parties in my own garden. In addition to, the back garden should be large, so I can have enough space to build a swimming pool. Staying in a well- equipped house will help my family have a better living lifestyle, so I want my house should have best quality fitting and modern appliances. The main color tone I use inside my house will be blue- the color symbolizes harmony and peace. Especially, I will decorate my bedroom with natural paintings because it will give me feelings of relaxation and serenity and help me release pressed strains. To put it briefly, home is always the nicest world for me and i hope for the day when my future house will come true.

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