My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars trere. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automa machines such as a smart clock, morden fridge, automa dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantasic TV. I might aloso join online classes on TV and not have to go to school
My Dream House
Here is my writing on the "My Dream House". I would be grateful if someone would review my essay and give me feedback on the sentence structure and grammar of writing.
My Dream House
House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person.
I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.
Thanks