Question

                                                                     My robot

I have a robot. His name is David. I saw him when i gone to the supermarket with my mom. He made me impressed. He has a big armor. A small head with two horns. His eyes are like Superman's eyes. His right hand always hold a white sword. David is my best friend. I really love him.

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Answer 1

I have a robot. His name is David. I saw him when I went to the supermarket with my mom. He made me impressed. He has big armor, a small head with two horns. His eyes are like Superman's eyes. His right hand always holds a white sword. David is my best friend. I really love him.

 

Answer 2

 

                                                                     My robot

I have a robot. His name is David. I saw him when i gone to the supermarket with my mom. He made me impressed. He has a big armor. A small head with two horns. His eyes are like Superman's eyes. His right hand always hold a white sword. David is my best friend. I really love him.

sai ở chỗ là;

hold -> holds vì right hand là danh từ số ít

tôi nghĩ ở chỗ này:

He has a big armor. A small head with two horns.

-> He has a big armor and a small head with two horns.

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