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LEARNING TO SURVIVE

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Last summer I took  a three - weeks survival course. The purpose of the

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course was teaching us how to survive outdoors, which there are no shops,

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no houses and no electricity. I had never slept outdoors after the course,

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and here I was learning to make a fire, navigate and find food in the forest.

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The part that I liked the most was catching Their own fish and cooking

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them over a fire. While doing the course, I realised how many people

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depended on modern technology. They think that they can't survive with

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it, but they can if  they learn how. I did it perfect!  I will never forget that

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course - it was more greatest experience have ever had so far. Now I think if I

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had not taken the surviving course, I would not have been able to deal with

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so many easy situations in life.

 

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DH
4 tháng 7 2021 lúc 15:27

Last summer I took  a three - weeks => three-weeks survival course. The purpose of the

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course was teaching => to teach us how to survive outdoors, which=> where there are no shops,

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no houses and no electricity. I had never slept outdoors after => before the course,

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and here I was learning to make a fire, navigate and find food in the forest.

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The part that I liked the most was catching Their => our own fish and cooking

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them over a fire. While doing the course, I realised how many=> much people

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depended => depend on modern technology. They think that they can't survive with=> without

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it, but they can if  they learn how. I did it perfect => perfectly!  I will never forget that

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course - it was more => the most greatest experience have ever had so far. Now I think if I

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had not taken the surviving course, I would not have been able to deal with

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so many easy situations in life.

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PT
4 tháng 7 2021 lúc 15:32

1.three-weeks->three-week    5.their->own

2.teching->to teach                 6.many->much

3.after->before                 9.more->the most

Mik chỉ thấy có từng này lỗi thôi sorry nha😁

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