There are give grammar mistakes in this passage, can youbfind and correct them?
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Dear Sir/Madam Iam writing because Iam qt the beach with some friend last weekend and the amount of rubbish where we found there was unbelievable. I think there are possibly two reason for this. Finally, people aren't responsible enough and they threw their rubbish away anywhere. Perhaps we need a few sign and people who patrol the beach, so I think we need more. Secondly, nobody clean the beach. I think this is terribly in a tourist town. We need people to clean the beach and empty the bins every day. We must definitely to do something about this situation. We must do it right away if we want a cheaner, attractive beach Alan |
There are give grammar mistakes in this passage, can youbfind and correct them?
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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing because I am -> was at the beach with some friend -> friends last weekend and the amount of rubbish where -> which we found there was unbelievable. I think there are possibly two reason -> reasons for this. Finally -> Firstly, people aren't responsible enough and they threw -> throw their rubbish away anywhere. Perhaps we need a few sign -> signs and people who patrol the beach, so I think we need more. Secondly, nobody clean -> cleans the beach. I think this is terribly -> terrible in a tourist town. We need people to clean the beach and empty the bins every day. We must definitely to do -> do something about this situation. We must do it right away if we want a cleaner, attractive -> more attractive beach Alan |