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My favorite sport is badminton. I started playing this sport when I was 12 years old. I often play badminton at school or on the yard at home. I play with my friends or relatives in my free time. I really like  badminton because it is fun and exciting , it helps me healthy and relaxing after the stressful school hours. That's why, I choose badminton as one of my hobbies. In short, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but mentally as well.

DH
9 tháng 5 2021 lúc 21:00

My favorite sport is badminton. I started playing this sport when I was 12 years old. I often play badminton at school or on => in the yard at home. I play with my friends or relatives in my free time. I really like badminton because it is fun and exciting , it makes me healthy and relaxing after the stressful school hours. That's why I choose badminton as one of my hobbies. In short, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but mentally as well.

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Bạn nên thay từ " to sum up " thành " in short " thì hay hơn nhé .

Còn lại tất cả đều ổn .

yeu Mik thích bài viết của bạn lắm đó !

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DD
9 tháng 5 2021 lúc 21:01

My favorite sport is badminton. I started playing this sport when I was 12 years old. I often play badminton at school or on the yard at home. I play with my friends or relatives in my free time. I love badminton because it's fun and fun, it keeps me healthy and relaxing after stressful school hours. That's why, I choose badminton as one of my hobbies. In short, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but also mentally.

mình chỉ thay thế vài từ mà thôi.

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HN
9 tháng 5 2021 lúc 21:02

Mình nghĩ là on the yard at home chuyển thành in the yard of my house; relaxing -> relaxed; after stressful school hours; sau that's why ko có dấu phẩy nha

Chúc bạn thi tốt ^^

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