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Topic: A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.- Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Answer:
Dear Mr. Sam
I know, you are the editor of the New World newspaper. Last week, a reporter of your news made complaints about a new program on TV named " The Nature," which is one of my favorites. I think that he is wrong when criticizing this exciting program. This one is a film about a bear called Bots and a wolf called Rome that survives human hunting, and I really like this because the director desires to make people aware of not hunting wild animals. Moreover, I also love this as its plot is very interesting together with many funny scenes and the characters are very realistic. Like other lovers, having been keen on this film too much, we are very sad and angry when someone looks down on this. Therefore, I hope that your journal will think over the complaint and have good solutions that are good for this program's lovers.
Thank you very much.
Best wishes,
Mr. Truong.
theo mình thấy thì chỗ 'the characters are very realistic' bạn nên chuyển đổi thành 'realistic characters', dùng như bạn vẫn được tuy nhiên để song hành cùng với funny scenes (sau with) thì bạn nên dùng 1 Noun phía sau để làm câu văn đỡ dài dòng hơn nha.