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Write a passage ( 100 - 120 words) about what you are going to do this summer vacation

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DT
5 tháng 4 2016 lúc 18:04

Bài này ngắn hơn nè :)))

Last summer, I had a good holiday. I never forget that meaningful holiday. When I came back my home from my holiday. First of all, I went to visit all my uncles and aunts then I and some my friends went to visit all my old teachers. We talked about our lives and works very much.
After that days, I stayed at home with my family. I helped my parents to paint the house and did something else. I talked about my life in Ho Chi Minh city and my work. My parents was very proud of me and I was very happy. After my holiday, I came back Ho Chi Minh city to go on working. I think that I had a good holiday and I’ll never forget it

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TB
5 tháng 4 2016 lúc 16:49

Hi, my name is Trang(thay tên bạn vào). Today I'm going to tell you about what I am going to do this summer vacation

I realy love the summer vacation. This summer I am going to do a lot of things. First, I'll visit Halong Bay. Second, I am gong to go swimming every week to have good health....

Bạn kể ra, ngoài ra tham khảo nè: http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/threads/120045-My-last-summer-holiday

Nhớ ủng hộ Bloom, Yoona nhé ok

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DT
5 tháng 4 2016 lúc 17:58
Last summer, my group and I spent our holiday on the Vung Tau Beach. This is one of the most beautiful beaches in Viet Nam. It took us two hours to get there.
We met at a bus station. At 5 a.m., we started our trip by bus. Although I felt tired after two long hours, the sea air made me rejuvenated.
Finally, the beach was in front of us. Its length is 750 m, with beautiful sea and form of entertainment is multiform. 
We arranged our bags and after that we swum in the blue sea. The weather was very nice. The golden light was spreading on the white sand. The tiny waves were crashing onto the beach. 
After swimming, we started to build sandcastles, listened to the sounds of the waves, felt the salted taste of the sea and enjoyed some special foods.
In the afternoon, we rode around on the road from the back to the front of the beach by double-bicycles. There was a wonderful sight: the sea on one side and the mountains on the other. It really made me forget everything and relax. And then, we decided to climb the Tao Phung mountain. The Standing God’s shoulder is great. We could see the mountains, houses and the wide sea. When we were climbing down the mountain, we bought some souvenirs for our friends.
The day went by so fast. I wanted to stay there longer but we had to come back to work the next day. The trip was short but it left a lasting impression on me. My friends and I have many memories of that day.
 
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DT
5 tháng 4 2016 lúc 17:54

Bạn Trang Bloom đọc kĩ yêu cầu nha " Write a passage ( 100 - 120 words) about what you are going to do this summer vacation " đề bài kêu bạn viết chứ đâu phải kêu bạn nói mà bạn còn Hi với Hello ? Cũng không phải giới thiệu đâu đi vào chủ đề chính luôn đi . 

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