Mình có đoạn văn này , bạn nào học giỏi tiếng anh giúp mình xem ngữ pháp và thì đã đúng chưa ạ? Và sửa như thế nào thì đúng ạ?
Hi, I'm Linh. And today, I want to share some of my hobbies and habits. Of the four seasons, autumn is my favorite season.For me, autumn is very special, because it is the time of the school year, the aspirations, dreams. I returned to school with a new excitement, determination and yearning for a school full of energy. I love autumn, do not know exactly when but it gives me a sense of strange peace. In the autumn in the North, cool winds bring the scent of new paddy fields or guava flavor in the garden. These are also the famous features of my hometown that I love the most. Later, I will probably never forget the autumns that have been associated with my youth. Above all, autumn is also a season with extremely pleasant weather. Yes, I love the cool and mild weather of autumn. It would be great if in the weather, the comfortable atmosphere of autumn could sit and watch TV with family or friends. My favorite TV shows are about movies or music on VTV and the Internet. On weekends, I often go out to do sports and watch movies with my family. In addition, I also take time for myself such as reading books, listening to music and completing some exercises. It can be said that this is the happiest time for me. Thank you for listening to my share.
Hi, I'm Linh. And today, I want to share everyone some of my hobbies and habits. Of all the four seasons, autumn is my favorite season. For me, autumn is very special, because it is the time of the school year, the aspirations, dreams. I return to school with a new excitement, determination and yearning for school with full of energy. I love autumn. I do not know exactly when but it gives me a sense of strange peace. In the =>x autumn in the North, cool winds bring the scent of new paddy fields or guava flavors in the garden. These are also the famous features of my hometown that I love the =>x most. Later, I will probably never forget the autumn that have been associated with my youth. Above all, autumn has extremely pleasant weather. Yes, I love the cool and mild weather of autumn. It would be great if in the weather, the comfortable atmosphere of autumn, I can sit and watch TV with family or friends. My favorite TV shows are thrilling/animation movies and music on VTV and surf the Internet. On weekends, I often do sports and play chess with my father watch movies with my family=>lặp . In addition, I also take time for myself =>I also spend time for a lot of interesting activites such as reading books, listening to music and completing some exercises. It can be said that this is the happiest time for me. Thank you for listening to my share.