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mấy pn nhận xét hộ mk bài văn này nha. ngữ pháp sai thì chình sửa hộ mk

All of the film i have seen, ''The heir'' is the one i like best. It's a romatic film, which was directed by Kang Shin Hyo. It starts Lee Min Ho and Pack Shin Hye.

The film is about the story of 2 people feelings are Kim Tan and Eun Sang. Although they are from different social classes and there are many challenges, they fall in love. The film has a happy ending: the offort and tenacity they have to be together. The film is moving and the acting the excelent. The visuals and music are so incredible.

Critics say is is a must-see and i completeagree. people try to watch it if you can.

TP
5 tháng 3 2017 lúc 15:12

Bạn ơi mình nghĩ bạn nên sửa như sau vì có một số chỗ bạn viết sai chính tả và mình sửa cách mở bài một chút

I have seen many film and my favourite film í ''The heir'' . It's a romatic film, which was directed by Kang Shin Hyo. It starts Lee Min Ho and Park Shin Hye.

The film is about the story of 2 people feelings are Kim Tan and Eun Sang. Although they are from different social classes and there are many challenges, they fall in love. The film has a happy ending because they finally come together and love each other. The film is moving and the acting the excelent. The visuals and music are so incredible.

Critics say is is a must-see and I complete agree. people try to watch it if you can.

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